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What language (specific words) did your classmate use to appeal the audience If there is no language appealing the audience, suggest some words.
He used affective words such as dear and miss but he also used words to describe his fear and the things he was passing through, he used the words horrible, nightmare, and he used the word "break free from this chains" he used this to make us think how rough was to be in the camps.
How moving is the letter? Do you think your classmate`s style is effective?
I think this letter was moving, because he told his father he missed him, and that he missed his home. He also talked about the things he lived and through the word make the reader see the painful and fatelessness things he was passing through. The only thing that this letter need to improve is that he described a lot but did not talked much about his father.
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